Saturday, November 13, 2010

The victory

A roaring sea captured in a small canister
What a suffocating irony
The face and the soul
A face that doesn't betray the soul
Words that fail feelings
The heart paints its walls with a thousand colors
The only colors these eyes convey - black n white
Chariot drivers - dreams , wishes and desires
Horses - Ethics, morals, commitments
A heart's universe
A brain's Kingdom
The intoxicating fragrant shifty petals
The reminding warning constant thorns
The moon dying to be trusted,
behind the passing clouds that dispute its existence
The clouds that have always rained in the past
Always dulled the sheen of the evasive moon

This time the clouds win
So that the moon doesn't blind
The face, the words and the eyes firm,
resolute, the heart won't be battered again
It will keep painting on the canvas of dreams
It won't wear,
It's not the fragile fabric of reality,
that dissolves in tears
Yes, the horses win
lest the chariot could get lost
The thorns win
Lest the heart could bleed to emptiness





Note: Victory comes with a price :)

6 comments:

  1. very true and,,,awesome,,,,,,,yes definitely....nothing in this world.,comes for free,,,,,,,,,,great work dear,,,,,,,,,,,

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  2. So you're RM. I read your comment on RS's blog and had to find you.So you're someone who is looking to find herself! Interesting. Very interesting writing style.
    Rosie

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  3. @ Adi : Thank you so much dear... you have been a permanent pillar of support to me. God bless you :)


    @ Rosie: I am humbled by the fact that you find my writing style interesting and many thanks for joining me and also to RS sir, his words can just draw out the words from within one... it's like listening to a song so beautiful that u feel like reverberating its words and adding similar words to the beautiful song so that it goes on and on... :)

    Take care

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  4. Dear RM,
    Namaste!
    Good Morning!
    Lovely thoughts and you have expressed really well.Keep writing!
    Have a beautiful day!
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. @ Anupamaji: Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it.... have a beautiful life :) :) stay happy

    Take care :)

    Regards

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  6. @ Rosie and Anupama ji

    Though my diary appears first in my blog list I generally write on Heart Speak, My diary is kind of old now :)
    I would request you to visit the link below

    http://heartspeakrm.blogspot.com/

    Regards
    RM

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